在日常学习、工作和生活中，说到作文，大家肯定都不陌生吧，作文一定要做到主题集中，围绕同一主题作深入阐述，切忌东拉西扯，主题涣散甚至无主题。那么一般作文是怎么写的呢？下面是小编收集整理的英语作文9篇，仅供参考，大家一起来看看吧。
英语作文 篇1
一、研究背景
在实际教学中，我们发现传统的文科教学，在作文（包括英语作文）的批改上盛行着两种方法：一是教师用刺眼的红笔进行“√”和“×”批阅，最后用一两句不痛不痒的话稍作点评；另一种则是教师经常对学生的作文进行面批。对于前者，几乎所有人（包括进行批改的教师）都认为其效果甚微，这种简单但过于“粗放”的方式显然已跟不上当今的英语教学；但对于后者，在肯定其效果以及教师的敬业心之时，我们不得不为那超负荷的工作量给教师身心带来的巨大压力而担心，同时也为他们在外语教育和教学时间分配上的合理性感到忧虑。毫无疑问，作文批改已成为英语教师和其他文科教师最耗时和最疲惫的工作。而且，即使付出了许多时间和精力，其反馈效果还是不太理想，使得很多学生学了十多年的英语，却拿不出一篇通顺像样的作文。为此，笔者试图从传承与创新的角度，提出几种想法，以求教于大方。
二、研究的内容和方法
教师的批改和反馈不仅要给学生的作文一个等级或者分数，还要作出一种过程评价。只有充分体会到了写作和反馈的过程，学生才能始终处于一种主动的学习之中，反馈的效果才会更加趋向于合理化和理想化。因为学生写作是一个过程，写作后的反馈是写作过程的延续，学生写作能力的提高与否同教师的反馈效果密切相关。由此可见，有效批改和反馈的作用不言而喻。那么，如何对学生的作文进行有效的批改和反馈呢?
1. 创造人性化的反馈环境，兼顾不同学生的写作水平
所谓创造人性化的反馈环境是指教师应该站在学生的立场上，贴近每位学生的兴趣、爱好和个性特长因材施“评”。这不仅可以缓解学生思想上的压力，还可以激发学生的写作兴趣。因此，对于写作基础较好的学生除了肯定之外还要给出改进意见；对于写作基础较差的学生，则应采取鼓励与指导相结合的方式——使用激励性的语言树立其自信心，并用商量的口气予以指导。
（1）当堂批改
学生刚写好作文，对题目的理解、构思、结构、用词造句等都还记忆犹新，若此时教师趁热打铁，当堂指导学生进行批改，就能产生很好的`批改效果。如：以“How to Build a Harmonious Society?”为例，笔者根据对学生的了解，制订了如下的当堂批改方案。分别选出好、中、差各一篇作文（不署名且事先不告诉学生各篇作文的等级），通过教室投影放映给全班学生阅读，然后通过电脑显示提供评价标准：作者的观点是否明确；各段是否服务于该观点；段落间及段与段的连接是否合理、流畅；结尾是否做到了首尾呼应或深化主题，或提出了解决问题的建议等。再让学生对照标准，评价这三篇作文。这样做的目的在于让学生明白作文评分要从内容（思想和材料）、语言和结构三方面入手。接着要求学生对这三篇作文作总体反馈。学生的反馈与实际情况可能大相径庭，不过教师恰好可以就这点进行针对性的分析。然后，教师再进行示范性的分析，分别指出三篇课堂习作中的优缺点。这样，不同层次的学生都有了参照，都有了发展的空间，也便于学生对自己的作文有更为深入的了解。
（2）彩色批改
传统的做法是教师用红笔批改学生作文中的错误，然后给出分数。红笔批阅的内容也就是错误的内容。殊不知，学生的心理是害怕红色，甚至抵制红色的。既然这样，那何不换位思考一下呢? 不妨试着和学生进行沟通，使用一些学生认可的方法进行批改。有些教师在批改学生作文时，尝试用绿色荧光笔画出学生习作中的好词好句，用紫色画出学生在时态和搭配等方面的错误。紫色的批改常侧重在句子层面的错误上，更易于学生进行改错和加强记忆。实践证明，用除红色外的彩笔进行修改，不会对学生造成视觉上的冲击，可以缓解红色的过度“警示作用”对学生自信的打击。所以，彩色批改法不仅不伤害学生的自尊，而且还使教师和学生摆脱了审美疲劳。这种批改方法也可用于学生的相互批改中。
（3）符号批改
根据研究，教师的批改中有相当一部分属于“鸡肋”，因为这些所谓的“错误”仅仅是与教师的风格不太吻合而已。如此“食而无味”的“鸡肋”不仅不能提高学生的写作水平，还有可能因此而改变了学生原想表达的意思。符号批改的出现，既减轻了教师的负担，又给学生提供了思考的余地。学生由接受教师的既定观点变成了主动进行探究性的学习，使学生真正成为写作的受益者。
英语作文 篇2
Importance of Being Busy
Sometimes life becomes so busy that you feel as if you are the only person to whom the whole world has been merciless and that you are the only person who is working harder than anyone else. Yes, the grass on the other side of the fence is always greener and fresher.
However, the more things one has to do or one is into, the greater the involvement in a mental, physical or social way in these things.① Due to this, ones own personal problems are out of sight, because all the time ones mind is thinking of completing the undertaken tasks.② Problems, once they are out of sight are out of mind.
Each thing that we do adds a new dimension to our personality. It shapes our thinking and makes us more organized, experienced, knowledgeable and creative. The time and sweat that we put in everyday into our tasks is the brick and mortar of our future. So friends, it is always better to be busy rather than idle. Now hasnt everyone heard that an idle mind is the devils workshop? Behind every successful man is a devotedly followed busy schedule rather than a woman.
英语作文 篇3
Shen Zhen is my favorite city. It is a young and promising city.
I have been living in this city for over ten years. I love the seafood in this city as well as its beautiful scenes. In summer, I can go to the sea to see the sun rise, or enjoy the fresh cool sea water. On weekend, I can go to the park to have a walk. Shen Zhen is my hometown. When I grow up, I want to make contribution to this city and make it becomes a better city.
英语作文 篇4
Almost all of us heard the story “ Here Comes the Wolf “ when we were little kids. What we can learn from the story is that we must be honest. However, there’re lots of phenomena of dishonesty nowadays.
Being dishonest does great harm not only to other people but also to yourself. Take the case of fake milk powder for example. After drinking this kind of milk, the babies had big heads while their legs and arms were still thin, which badly affected their health. To our great relief, the producers got accused and punished for all the serious consequences in the end.
Having the reputation of being honest and reliable will make other people trust you, which will provide you many benefits and give you opportunities that others may not get. Being honest, you will find it easier to cooperate with others and people will be friendly to you and support you. In a sense, if life is a long journey, honesty will be the backpack that should be taken along all the way.
Let’s pick up our “ backpack “ —honesty, and start the wonderful journey!
英语作文 篇5
Sight is the ability to see the physical world while vision is the gift of seeing beyond it. Sight enables us to take the physical world in so we can participate in it with knowledge. It brings us pleasure through our eyes, which perceive the colors and shapes of all the myriad expressions of nature and human beings. It helps us feel in control, allowing us to see what is coming toward us, which way we are going, and exactly where we are standing at a given moment. We are able to read signs and books, navigate the interiors of buildings with ease, sense and perceive how a person is feeling by the expressions that cross her face.
As anyone who has lost their eyesight can tell you, though, there are things that are clearer when you cannot see the world through your eyes. One of the reasons many meditation instructors advise sitting with the eyes closed is because we automatically become more in touch with our inner world when we are not distracted by the outer world. It is in this state that vision becomes our mode of seeing. Vision comes from within and shows us how to navigate the realms of thought, feeling, and emotion. It enables us to see things that aren抰 yet manifested in the world of form, and it also connects us to that part of ourselves that exists separately from the world of form.
As we age, even those of us with perfect eyesight will generally lose some of our acuity, but this loss is usually replaced with inner vision. This is the time of life when we are meant to turn inside and take what are sometimes the very first steps of a journey that cannot be traced on a map. We call upon intuition and feel our way along a path that ultimately carries us beyond the realm we can see with our eyes and into the land of spirit
英语作文 篇6
外国友人说重庆变化很大
根据内容要求写一篇 50 － 80 词的短文。要求：书写格式正确，语句通畅、流畅，无语法错误。
内容提要：今年四月 AAPP 要在重庆召开，外国友人受到重庆人民的热烈欢迎。外国友人说：重庆变化很大，街道清洁，灯火明亮，城市秀美，人更美，人们将记住重庆，重庆的明天会越来越好。
参考范文：
In April this year the AAPP was held in Chongqing . The foreign friends were warmly welcomed by Chongqing people . The foreign friends said ， Chongqing has changed a lot . The streets are clean ， the lights are bright ， the city is beautiful ， and the people are friendly . Chongqing will be remembered and her tomorrow will become better and better .
英语作文 篇7
the loud rock music, and the noisy argument happen in your next door, and you just want to read your favorite book or even to have a good sleep. how do you feel your neighbor in this situation? after you have lived for one year, one day, your friends ask your neighbor’s name; however, you may see them only several times in a year. are they good neighbors? although these situations are in imagination, in reality, they exist. good neighbors can create safe and warm living sphere. people can’t help ask what is a good neighbor? there is a board and vague question, but, in my opinion, good neighbor should be characteristics of basic conditions: concerned about other’s feelings, and helping each other.
the sense of concern about others plays a fundamental role in the harmony of the neighborhood. residents enjoy their family time in their own home. however, the outsiders, neighbors those have their happy moment by yielding noises, for example, loud music, and kala ok at midnight, or by shouting at home during hockey game, can disrupt such sweet time. in addition, the extent of concern about the backyard also creates the problems between neighbors. the garbage scatters everywhere, attracting mosquitoes that may be bring infectious virus such west nile bird virus, and neighbors do not shovel the snow on the house side-road, leading to inconvenience to the disable people who ride wheels. the concern forces neighbor to turn down volumes and clear their living environment, and hence retain the harmony in the neighborhood. such concern about others can avoid the conflicts between neighbors, but helping each other can result in a safe and warm neighborhood. your neighbors shovel the snow on your side-road when they do for themselves. they take care of your pets when you are not at home. they watch strangers when they see them roaming around the neighborhood. in turn, you do the same thing for your neighbors when you are in that situation. accordingly, the neighborhood becomes more and more safe and warm. the help will extend out of the neighborhood. last month, the battery of my landlady’s truck was dead in the parking lord. i though that she would call some friends or mechanists for help; however, half and hour later, her neighbor brought a battery for her.
therefore, the judgment of a good neighbor does not depend on the reputation that purports the first impression but on their attitudes to others, including the sense of concern about others, and the extent of helping each other. such characteristics can bring about a safe and warm neighborhood and eliminate the conflicts between neighbors
英语作文 篇8
MY National Day Holiday
Am,the National Day have come.I have looked forward it for several days.It's reallky a good chance to have a picnic with friends.In the morning,just as planned, we met at school gate at 7.00 O'clock,then we walked towards a farm in the countyside.The sky is bluethe sunshine is genial and wind is breezing. we enjoyed the fresh air and calmness of thecounty.We climmed the hill, played on the grass ,swam in the river.
How exiciting it was! we all enjoyed it very much. It was an forgettable and happy national day!
英语作文 篇9
1.In view of the seriousness of this problem, effective measures should be taken before things get worse.
考虑到问题的严重性，在事态进一步恶化之前，必须采取有效的措施。
2. The majority of students believe that part-time job will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills, which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets.
大部分学生相信业余工作会使他们有更多机会发展人际交往能力，而这对他们未来找工作是非常有好处的。
3. It is indisputable that there are millions of people who still have a miserable life and have to face the dangers of starvation and exposure.
无可争辩，现在有成千上万的人仍过着挨饿受冻的痛苦生活。
4. Although this view is wildly held, this is little evidence that education can be obtained at any age and at any place.
尽管这一观点被广泛接受，很少有证据表明教育能够在任何地点、任何年龄进行。
5. No one can deny the fact that a persons education is the most important aspect of his life.
没有人能否认：教育是人生最重要的一方面。
6. People equate success in life with the ability of operating computer.
人们把会使用计算机与人生成功相提并论。
7. In the last decades, advances in medical technology have made it possible for people to live longer than in the past.
在过去的几十年，先进的医疗技术已经使得人们比过去活的时间更长成为可能。
8. In fact, we have to admit the fact that the quality of life is as important as life itself.
事实上，我们必须承认生命的质量和生命本身一样重要。
9. We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.
我们应该不遗余力地美化我们的环境。
10. People believe that computer skills will enhance their job opportunities or promotion opportunities.
人们相信拥有计算机技术可以获得更多工作或提升的机会。
11. The information Ive collected over last few years leads me to believe that this knowledge may be less useful than most people think.
从这几年我搜集的信息来看，这些知识并没有人们想象的那么有用。
12. Now, it is generally accepted that no college or university can educate its students by the time they graduation.
现在，人们普遍认为没有一所大学能够在毕业时候教给学生所有的知识。
13. This is a matter of life and death--a matter no country can afford to ignore.
这是一个关系到生死的问题，任何国家都不能忽视。
14. For my part, I agree with the latter opinion for the following reasons:
我同意后者，有如下理由：
15. Before giving my opinion, I think it is important to look at the arguments on both sides
在给出我的观点之前，我想看看双方的观点是重要的。
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